Waiting for You

Written by Zachary Blaine Maxfield

Warning – This review contains spoilers

Waiting for You tells a captivating story about two LDS Sister Missionaries who find themselves caught in a whirlwind of danger when they get involved with a retired drug dealer. The trio makes a series of unfortunate, deadly mistakes that force them to work together, even though they come from drastically different worlds. The story unfolds with a gripping sense of desperation, and the high stakes keep the tension alive throughout. I found the script to be well-structured, with each setback escalating the intensity and making the characters’ struggles feel palpable. Audiences who enjoy thrillers with strong action and suspense would be drawn into this story, especially during a table read.

I can see that the writer, Zachary Blaine Maxfield, did a great job of weaving in the moral dilemmas faced by the missionaries and how their faith influences their actions. The flashbacks provide essential context, though they might be a bit confusing for viewers not familiar with LDS practices. That said, they add a deeper layer to the narrative and help explain the characters’ motivations. The dialogue feels natural, and each of the main characters has a clear voice that sets them apart.

From a technical standpoint, the formatting is solid, and I appreciate how the scenes are described with just the right amount of detail to guide the reader’s imagination. Everything flowed smoothly, and the pacing felt tight and engaging.

I think Waiting for You offers a compelling narrative with a unique blend of religious themes and crime elements. It’s a well-written script that I believe would resonate with audiences looking for an intense, character-driven thriller.