Dazy Girl

Written by Charri Brummer
WARNING! This review contains spoilers.

Dazy Girl is a tender exploration of love, loss, and the unexpected ways we form connections, even in the most ordinary places—like a simple hammock grove. The story follows Riley, a young woman piecing her life back together after a breakup. It’s easy to get lost in her daily routines, the kind that are comforting in their predictability, until Sam enters the picture. Sam is quirky, persistent, and utterly charming, and their relationship develops beautifully through shared moments, playful banter, and a sweet, recurring symbolism involving cookies and daisies. Just when I found myself caught up in the blossoming romance, the narrative takes a heart-wrenching turn, revealing Sam’s terminal illness. This twist casts a shadow over their deepening connection and leads Riley on an emotional journey toward acceptance and healing.

The grammar, spelling, and punctuation are solid, but the screenplay’s formatting needs some love. For instance, character names aren’t consistently capitalized, and parentheticals are embedded within the dialogue instead of beneath the character’s name, which could throw off the rhythm of reading, especially during scenes with fast-paced exchanges. The lack of age indicators early on was a bit frustrating, making it tricky to visualize the characters right from the start. Minor tweaks aside, the story is engaging with natural dialogue and a story that flows smoothly.

What really stands out in Dazy Girl is Riley’s evolution from heartbreak to finding unexpected love with Sam, who brings spontaneity and laughter into her structured world. Their dynamic is delightful and full of humor, like when they bicker over hammock spots or engage in playful cookie-related arguments. But it’s the emotional depth that hits hard. The screenplay weaves in themes of mortality and loss so seamlessly that I found myself alternating between laughter and genuine tears. Sam’s illness and eventual passing may feel somewhat predictable, but the way the story handles the aftermath—Riley’s struggle to honor his wishes and the bittersweet journey of moving forward—left a lasting impression. The emotional beats are paced perfectly, keeping the story compelling.

Dazy Girl offers a heartfelt, engaging narrative full of witty banter and poignant moments. It’s a beautiful blend of romance and drama that I think would really resonate with audiences looking for a story that makes them both laugh and cry.